Thursday, November 13, 2008

My haiku poems

A haiku poem  has three sentences with syllables. The first sentence  has 5 syllables and the second one has 7 syllables  and the third has 5. My best haiku poem is called  friends.

Friends
My best friends are great.
My best friends are nice to me.
I love my best friends.


1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Your poem has that emotional punch which a Haiku is supposed to have and you can make it better by bringing in some rhyme into it
haiku poems